Semarang State University
(SSU) is the sixth most favorite campus in Indonesia, according to okezone.com. SSU is located in Semarang,
The capital city of Central Java, Indonesia. It has eight (8) faculties; they
are The Faculty of Education Science, The Faculty of Language and Arts, The
Faculty of Social Science, The Faculty of Social Science, The Faculty of
Mathematics and Natural Science, The Faculty of Engineering, The Faculty of
Sports Science, The Faculty of Economics, and The Faculty of Law. The student
body is approximately 40.000 students enrolled in those eight faculties.
SSU applies conservation concept in every part
of its activity. This concept contains three principles of conservation; they
are environmental conservation, culture conservation, and religion
conservation. The first principle is reflected in the rules that student must
not drive their motorcycle or car in the campus. They have to use the
university bus or walk through the campus. It is one way to decrease air
pollution in campus environment. Besides, SSU also have mini forest campus to
support its environmental principle. The second principle is culture
conservation. SSU always have many ways to preserve Indonesian’s culture, one of
them by making an event that perform some of traditional dancing. There are
also culture event like kethoprak, karawitan, and so on. The last principle is religion conservation.
The majority religion of SSU student is moslem, that is why there are a lot of
Islamic activity in campus, such as moslem community in every department,
faculty, and university, KAP ( religion event that held every Sunday morning
once in two weeks), and mentoring (intensive religion self-developing once in a
week). Not only for Moslem, has non-moslem also had their activity in
university level. This activity makes them to be a person that not only great
in their academic skill, but also character.
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BalasHapusHello Putri, I do like reading your writing about Semarang State University. It is précis and easy to understand what you mean. The content is great.
BalasHapusBy the way, maybe you should open your grammar book again to check this one :
Diction:
I think you should check on your dictionary about proper word to determine its use. For example : drive their motorcycle = ride their motorcycle.
Because I think “ drive” is used for car.
Grammar:
As far as I know, if am not mistaken that the use of “have” is for plural subject, and “has” is for “singular” subject. I think that SSU is singular. So, you can change the sentence :
• SSU also have mini forest = SSU also has mini forest
• SSU always have many ways = SSU always has many ways
I also find one sentence about expressions of quantity that I think you should check it. For example : a lot of Islamic activity = a lot of Islamic activities.
I think that it means that “ many activities” because activity is count noun.
Confusing Sentence :
Not only for Moslem, has non-moslem also had their activity in university level
I think you should omit “ has” = Not only for Moslem, but also non-moslem had their activity in university level.
Well, your writing is great, but I think you should be more accurate to determine the use of grammar. Keep writing and do not forget to check it.
Thank you. :)
Okay Dede, Thanks for your feedback :)
BalasHapus